Which revision makes the thesis more focused?
Please select an answer first.
Correct answer: A
The correct answer is Schools should offer a late bus twice a week so students can attend tutoring and clubs..
- Identify the writing task: Determine the claim, audience, purpose, evidence, counterclaim, organization, or revision issue being tested.
- Check support and structure: Make sure each reason has relevant evidence and explanation, and that paragraphs move logically from one idea to the next.
- Revise for clarity: Choose formal, precise, fair language and confirm that the conclusion follows the evidence without overclaiming.
The focused thesis identifies a specific action, schedule, and purpose that the essay can support.
